So I’m not quite going back to square one, but I’m definitely going to have to do a lot of tweaking to what I have done of my piece thus far in order to make it both organic and change it so that it is based on a certain style (or in my case a series of styles) but then elaborates on them and takes them in a different direction. In retrospect, it probably wasn’t a good idea for me to do film music- I’d like very much to be a film composer someday so my natural tendency is to write film music…Plain and simple, without deviating away from the music’s natural style and without tweaking anything In other words, what comes naturally is definitely not best for this project, and from this I challenge myself- to leave the railroad tracks behind and start writing as though I’m thinking for myself, rather than for the film. It is for this reason that I’ve decided not to use the movie clips so much, seeing as before I was using them as a constant reference. Doing this only encourages me to write music which would suit the film, and in doing so, I’m not following the guidelines given in class…Earning me a (metaphorical) slap on the wrist. With this in mind, I’m going through what I have written so far, and analyzing it before I tweak it.
Part 1: Romance. I have no problem beginning the piece with something that sounds like typical romantic music, though I definitely have major problems diverging from that. What I’ve done this far to make it different is just substituting crunchy, dissonant chords for where a resolution should be…But I can tell already that that’s not quite enough. I’ve thought about how to elaborate on this quite a bit, often while knitting which makes little to no sense because not only am I drawing blanks left and right but my ‘scarf’ looks like it has been eaten by a house hippo. Obviously I’ve got to start with the basics…What are the components of romantic music? Thick texture, slow rhythms, lots of octaves, big leaps, and some chromaticism.
First, though, I need to have a destination in mind…Where do I want this to go? It can begin as a romantic piece, but where should it end? Well, I should begin with the random crunchy chords, for starters. By putting them where the resolutions should be, I’m leading it somewhere…Possibly toward the world of atonality, but I don’t want the whole purpose of this to be taking a romantic piece and unraveling it into an atonal piece. I could quite possibly take it somewhere completely unromantic, but I don’t want that just to be a progression of crunchy chords. I’ve decided to add a few little hints throughout the piece which lead to a staccato end of the romantic piece- staccato isn’t usually used in a romantic piece, and the texture wears out to be very thin as well, a big change from the full texture it began with. The crunchy chords simply lead toward the question of whether the ending section is actually tonal or atonal...I still haven’t decided, and will leave that decision up to the listener.
I’ve also taken the tenor clef out of the cello to make more of a bass line…And because tenor clef is a bit hard…heh.
Part 2: Horror. Yeah, I’ve scrapped the use of a cult film. As fond as I am of Reservoir Dogs, it’s hard to compose music typical of a cult film because cult films generally use a very wide range of music…A Clockwork Orange uses the theme from Rossini’s “Thieving Magpie,” and Beethoven’s 9th, while Donnie Darko uses more mellow pieces, like Gary Jules’ rendition of “Mad World.” I need something a bit more specific to write for, and horror films are fairly stereotypical…Which should be easy to write. For this one I’ve got a fairly good goal in mind. It’ll begin atonal and discordant, with a very high register and maybe some special effects on the violin like playing behind the bridge- we all love that noise, don’t we? But the rhythm will be what moves it toward a kind of jazzed up version of horror music. This part could be interesting and fun to write. What sucks is that I’m going to have to get rid of pretty much everything that I have right now L Oh well. Live and let die.
Boooooo there it all went…I just deleted it and then saved the changes I made. Bye-bye music!
I’ve decided that the cello will play an important role in this section, and it’ll be pizzicato, like a bass. More bass is always good. While the violin keeps the tremolo going on notes played behind the bridge (it’ll eventually work slowly to ponticello and finally playing on the actual strings)
ORGANIC! So this has to be organic, an organic whole. “characterized by the systematic arrangement of parts; organized; systematic: elements fitting together into a unified, organic whole.” So says www.dictionary.com. So my piece needed to be more unified, and I found a way to solve this- a motif! The motif present in the very beginning of the romance part comes back- surprise surprise- in the horror section! The interval of a minor 6th followed by downward motion, though it’s changed from a major 2nd to a minor 2nd, which will help with making this section sound more horrific and clashy- just what I want.
Fast-forward to today (I wrote most of that last night) after it was played in class. Thanks again to Kim and Saird for playing today with me J Here are a few things I’ve jotted down to keep in mind for when I edit it/add more to it.
- bring some of the lyrical section from part 1 back in part 3- an idea I had was to do so playing it as artificial harmonics on the violin or cello, to keep the kind of ‘corpse around the corner’ (haha) mood.
- Make it a bit clearer where I’m heading in section 1.
- Tweak the eighth and sixteenth section in the piano in the 2nd section to make it less blahhhh
- Change the triplet section in the left hand of the piano in the first section or put that part in the violin instead
- Write ‘pizzicato’ in the cello part where it is appropriate
- Add more to the jazziness of part 2
Wednesday, November 12, 2008
Tuesday, November 4, 2008
Entry 9.
Onto the next part…Because I haven’t got the guts yet to start composing a new score for Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers yet, I’ve decided to continue on rather than going back to the beginning and composing from there. The Breakfast at Tiffany’s piece is the second, preceded by the LOTR, and followed by a clip from the cult film, Reservoir Dogs. For this, I’ve decided to use a compilation of videos chronicling the adventures of Mr. Pink in the film, though I was seriously tempted to do the scene in which Mr. White dances around a bound victim with a tank of gasoline…Watch the movie, seriously. You’ll understand why I was so tempted to write for that scene.
The music for this clip will be atonal. Yaaaay! For the most part, anyway. The cliché here will be jazz…Though jazz has a tendency to have a freer range of sonorities, I’m cutting everything loose and the bass line, which will mostly be in the left hand of the piano (which may switch to right hand piano and violin later on for more funkiness) allowing the cello to do a bit of bass too while the right hand in the piano and the violin jazz it up.
I wasn’t planning on getting much of this done to show in class on Friday the 31st, but since the power’s out in my residence and even the emergency lights have worn out (the power was out earlier today as well) my computer screen is my light source, and since I’m not keen on going to sleep anytime soon, it’s composition time.
It’s funny how easy it is to go back to writing atonal music, after doing the first section based on a tonal melody. I always thought it would be so much harder composing atonal music, but without all the rules that go along with tonal music and the need to write something that will be accepted by the general public, it’s so much easier. It’s so much easier not to worry about what your audience will think, as opposed to tonal music, which I now find much harder.
Annnd cue power. Excellent. Now I don’t have to worry about my computer running out of batteries in the middle of a compositional rant.
I’ve gone back and added a bit more funkiness into the romantic part of my piece….Instead of letting it resolve where it should, I decided it’d be nice to play a trick on the listener and say ‘ha ha, too bad,’ and put in a fairly discordant chord where a nice resolution should be. This way people get the point that it’s both romantic music, and a parody of that very cliché.
Back to part 2…Part 3, really, after I compose the first part- action. So I’m working on music for a cult film right now, beginning with a kind of jazzy motif which is completely atonal, though I haven’t done too much with the rhythm…It’s definitely something to consider when I go through and edit, though right now I’d like to have at least something to lean on, when I can’t lean on the tonality. Because I don’t really want this part of the piece to go where people think it will go, I’m having it trail back into tonality fairly early in the piece- this segment probably won’t be very long- and switch characters almost completely, to be something which is much more action packed rather than jazzy. I’m keeping in mind that the clip going with this part of the piece has guns in it, so I might throw a few musical sound effects in just for kicks. For the latter half of this section I’ve put a good amount of random warbling in the cello and left hand of the piano just to add a bit of tension, over which the violin has a melody which is in a different key than the rest, which seems to be centered around the note B. Every once in a while it touches base with a B, and ends with a good, climactic ending, just as this section of the piece finishes.
And bonus! I have both power AND printer ink!
The music for this clip will be atonal. Yaaaay! For the most part, anyway. The cliché here will be jazz…Though jazz has a tendency to have a freer range of sonorities, I’m cutting everything loose and the bass line, which will mostly be in the left hand of the piano (which may switch to right hand piano and violin later on for more funkiness) allowing the cello to do a bit of bass too while the right hand in the piano and the violin jazz it up.
I wasn’t planning on getting much of this done to show in class on Friday the 31st, but since the power’s out in my residence and even the emergency lights have worn out (the power was out earlier today as well) my computer screen is my light source, and since I’m not keen on going to sleep anytime soon, it’s composition time.
It’s funny how easy it is to go back to writing atonal music, after doing the first section based on a tonal melody. I always thought it would be so much harder composing atonal music, but without all the rules that go along with tonal music and the need to write something that will be accepted by the general public, it’s so much easier. It’s so much easier not to worry about what your audience will think, as opposed to tonal music, which I now find much harder.
Annnd cue power. Excellent. Now I don’t have to worry about my computer running out of batteries in the middle of a compositional rant.
I’ve gone back and added a bit more funkiness into the romantic part of my piece….Instead of letting it resolve where it should, I decided it’d be nice to play a trick on the listener and say ‘ha ha, too bad,’ and put in a fairly discordant chord where a nice resolution should be. This way people get the point that it’s both romantic music, and a parody of that very cliché.
Back to part 2…Part 3, really, after I compose the first part- action. So I’m working on music for a cult film right now, beginning with a kind of jazzy motif which is completely atonal, though I haven’t done too much with the rhythm…It’s definitely something to consider when I go through and edit, though right now I’d like to have at least something to lean on, when I can’t lean on the tonality. Because I don’t really want this part of the piece to go where people think it will go, I’m having it trail back into tonality fairly early in the piece- this segment probably won’t be very long- and switch characters almost completely, to be something which is much more action packed rather than jazzy. I’m keeping in mind that the clip going with this part of the piece has guns in it, so I might throw a few musical sound effects in just for kicks. For the latter half of this section I’ve put a good amount of random warbling in the cello and left hand of the piano just to add a bit of tension, over which the violin has a melody which is in a different key than the rest, which seems to be centered around the note B. Every once in a while it touches base with a B, and ends with a good, climactic ending, just as this section of the piece finishes.
And bonus! I have both power AND printer ink!
Wednesday, October 29, 2008
Entry 8.
So I've decided to begin with one of the easier genres to write music for- romance. That's right, sappy lovey dovey music that could be played while watching the last scene in Breakfast at Tiffany's. The clip, in total, is about 3 minutes long...So I might not end up using the entire thing. In this clip, my music will be replacing "Moon River." A classic. That's all fine and well, though, but my piece, despite the fact that it has to be discintively romantic, has to have something 'different' about it. I haven't exactly decided what that's going to be yet...I'm used to writing pieces that could pass for film scores, so it'll be strange to have to stray from that habit.
Romance movie music...It's slow, it's full of strings, it's legato. I've already got about 30 seconds of music written, so I've got a motif or two to play around with. The instrumentation's pretty simple- I've decided on violin, cello, timpani and piano rather than trombone, cello and piano. Now for the tweaking part. First I have to find the essence of romantic music...Lots of appropriately placed dynamics, (so I could mess them around a bit, make insignificant parts loud and the nice parts insanely soft) imitation in the parts, (I could take this to an extreme) graceful curves in the piece (I could make it as disjunct as all heck) and it's generally smoothe and legato (I could put in abrupt stops and change the articulations.) So I've got lots of things I could do...But what do I want to do?
Since romantic music generally has good symmetry and long, flowing phrases, I've decided to see just how long I can make one line go on for...Make it a never-ending kind of rambling 'I love you I love you I love you I love you' kind of thing, and even use the natural rhythm for those words in the piece for effect. So there's one thing- this whole section will be one long, rambly line, simply stating the motif over and over until the listeners are as sick of that rhythm as they are of cheesy romance films. Seriously, there are a lot of them out there, and they all end the same way. Since each portion of my piece can only be so long, I can’t go on for too long with the same motif, so I need another way to tweak it. There are some unexpected turns in the harmony, but even still, it sounds fairly typical of a romantic piece. My natural tendancy is to leave it like that, because I really like composing movie music, but I have to tweak this so it doesn’t sound so…Cliché. Therefore the cello and violin will be plucking. Where they’d normally be playing nice, long bows, they’re going to pluck. The piano will still have the legato melody, and its dynamics will have to be compromised so that it doesn’t swamp out the strings, but I’m keeping the timpani in at a good solid dynamic. I don’t think the timpani are very typical of this kind of music anyway, so there, I’ve un-cliché’d this piece. And it’s done! Well, this part, anyway, and playing the clip from Breakfast at Tiffany’s behind it really adds to the effect, and somehow, what I wrote seems to fit the movie quite well, ending at a very appropriate place, 1:06 into the clip. Woot! This part won’t be the first part of my piece…I’m thinking action first (Lord of the Rings) followed by romance (Breakfast at Tiffany’s) then cult film (Reservoir Dogs) followed by Horror (The Shining) and ended with drama (American History X) It should be epic!
Romance movie music...It's slow, it's full of strings, it's legato. I've already got about 30 seconds of music written, so I've got a motif or two to play around with. The instrumentation's pretty simple- I've decided on violin, cello, timpani and piano rather than trombone, cello and piano. Now for the tweaking part. First I have to find the essence of romantic music...Lots of appropriately placed dynamics, (so I could mess them around a bit, make insignificant parts loud and the nice parts insanely soft) imitation in the parts, (I could take this to an extreme) graceful curves in the piece (I could make it as disjunct as all heck) and it's generally smoothe and legato (I could put in abrupt stops and change the articulations.) So I've got lots of things I could do...But what do I want to do?
Since romantic music generally has good symmetry and long, flowing phrases, I've decided to see just how long I can make one line go on for...Make it a never-ending kind of rambling 'I love you I love you I love you I love you' kind of thing, and even use the natural rhythm for those words in the piece for effect. So there's one thing- this whole section will be one long, rambly line, simply stating the motif over and over until the listeners are as sick of that rhythm as they are of cheesy romance films. Seriously, there are a lot of them out there, and they all end the same way. Since each portion of my piece can only be so long, I can’t go on for too long with the same motif, so I need another way to tweak it. There are some unexpected turns in the harmony, but even still, it sounds fairly typical of a romantic piece. My natural tendancy is to leave it like that, because I really like composing movie music, but I have to tweak this so it doesn’t sound so…Cliché. Therefore the cello and violin will be plucking. Where they’d normally be playing nice, long bows, they’re going to pluck. The piano will still have the legato melody, and its dynamics will have to be compromised so that it doesn’t swamp out the strings, but I’m keeping the timpani in at a good solid dynamic. I don’t think the timpani are very typical of this kind of music anyway, so there, I’ve un-cliché’d this piece. And it’s done! Well, this part, anyway, and playing the clip from Breakfast at Tiffany’s behind it really adds to the effect, and somehow, what I wrote seems to fit the movie quite well, ending at a very appropriate place, 1:06 into the clip. Woot! This part won’t be the first part of my piece…I’m thinking action first (Lord of the Rings) followed by romance (Breakfast at Tiffany’s) then cult film (Reservoir Dogs) followed by Horror (The Shining) and ended with drama (American History X) It should be epic!
Tuesday, October 21, 2008
Entry 7.
…And now back into the tonal realm…Right? Well, we do have to put some kind of a spin on this whole cliché thing. I have to keep telling myself that we’re not just writing an example of a cliché, but taking a cliché and adding to it just to change it enough so that it’s still recognizable, though different at the same time. I’ve decided to write a medley of movie themes based on different genres. I’ve decided to toy around with taking a few scenes from actual movies and composing a clip of music to go along with it, just to get a taste of what film composing might be like. If you’re reading this, Clark, and don’t want me to do this, feel free to say so. The pieces I compose will have no traces of the film’s actual score in it, so everything will be original. The film clips will be purely to work out a bit of timing and inspiration.
As for genres…I’ve put together a bit of a list, just to get started.
- Horror/slasher/thriller ***
- Mystery *
- Romance ***
- Action **
- Comedy *
- Western ***
- Cartoon *
- Cult film ***
- Martial arts **
- Musical *
- Science fiction **
- Comic hero *
- War ***
- Drama ***
The stars indicate the likelihood of each genre being in my composition, though I’ll probably think of other genres to add to this list and change my list of preferences a few times before/during the composition process. So far, it looks as though I’ll be doing a medley composed of horror, romance, western, cult film, war and drama based themes.
I’ve put a bit of thought into the instrumentation, but haven’t come to any conclusions yet. Since there will be three performers, and since most movie music is fairly dense in texture, I’ve decided that no matter what, the use of piano in this composition will be a constant. A good idea would be to put a bass instrument and a treble instrument in there as well, so I’m leaning toward bass (possibly electric bass, though I’m not sure yet) or cello and some type of a wind instrument for the upper voice. I’d like to compose for violin, but I’d really rather have only one stringed instrument for this one. Flute might be neat, since it, in my opinion, sounds good in both its high and low registers and is fairly versatile. My only worries would be if it would be drowned out by the cello and piano…(Yes, I just decided that I’m using cello) Maybe trumpet would be a better idea, though (please don’t kill me, Heidi!) I’m not very partial to that particular instrument. I might go for trombone, because it can be both loud and ominous and soft and haunting.
Piano, cello and trombone it is, then. A slightly strange combination, but I think it might work out. I’ll toy around with this a bit before I make any commitments.
Films! I almost forgot- I’ve come up with a few ideas for which films to use for each genre. Well, not each genre, just the ones I’m more likely to use. Thanks to the book “501 Must-See Movies,” I’ve got LOTS of options.
Horror:
- Psycho *
- The Birds *
- Night of the Living Dead **
- Carrie ***
- The Shining ***
Romance:
- Gone with the Wind *
- Casablanca *
- Breakfast at Tiffany’s ***
- Love Story **
- Pretty Woman *
Action:
- Spartacus *
- Indiana Jones, Raiders of the Lost Ark ***
- Die Hard *
- Braveheart ***
- Gladiator **
Western:
- Dances with Wolves **
- The Good, The Bad and the Ugly *
- The Postman *
- Davy Crockett *
Cult/independant Films:
- Scarface *
- Clockwork Orange *
- Donnie Darko ***
- Reservoir Dogs ***
- Pulp Fiction *
- Elephant **
- Requiem for a Dream ***
- Fight Club ***
- Boondock Saints *
-
Drama:
- American History X ***
- 25th Hour ***
- The Graduate *
- One Flew over the Cuckoo’s Nest **
- Fatal Attraction *
- The Shawshank redemption *
- American Beauty ***
War:
- The Great Escape *
- M*A*S*H *
- Apocalypse Now ***
- Schindler’s List *
- Saving Private Ryan *
After going through the list of movies I made up, I’ve decided to use the following genres and if I’ve got too many, then maybe cut from them…But they’ll be the foundation for this piece: horror, romance, cult/indie, drama and possibly action. There’s a pretty good selection there, though I’ll definitely have to separate drama and cult/indie and put western, romance and horror in between them, because those first three genres could have similar sounding sections. Horror, romance and action are very disctinctive too, so they shouldn’t prove to be too much of a problem. I’ve narrowed down my movie choices too.
Horror: Carrie or Shining (Go Stephen King!)
Drama: American History X, 25th Hour (Yes, Edward Norton is my favourite actor) or American Beauty
Romance: Definitely Breakfast at Tiffany’s
Cult/Indie: Requiem for a Dream, Fight Club, Reservoir Dogs or Donnie Darko. Probably one of the first three.
Action: Spartacus, Gladiator, Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers or Braveheart.
As for movie scenes…
Carrie: The ending scene as she burns everything down.
The Shining: When Jack Nicholson cracks and does the “Heeeeeere’s Johnny!” thing.
American History X: Ending scene. If I can watch it without crying.
25th Hour: Final scene
American Beauty: final scene as well…I’m noticing a trend here
Breakfast at Tiffany’s: Once again…The ending.
Requiem for a Dream: …The ending…
Fight Club: Undecided. Either the ending, or the realization.
Reservoir Dogs: I’m tempted to do the gasoline and ear scene, though I think I like “Stuck in the Middle with You” in that scene too much to want to change it…Maybe the showdown between Mr. Pink and Mr. White, or one of the action scenes.
Donnie Darko: Not too sure…Though it’d be cool if it involved Frank the bunny.
Spartacus: Not sure…It’s been a while since I’ve seen it.
Gladiator: One of the arena scenes
Lord of the Rings: The battle at Helm’s Deep
Braveheart: battle scene
I’ve looked into finding some of the scenes on youtube too…For those of you who haven’t seen these movies and don’t want the endings spoiled, I’d suggest you not watch these videos, because they’re kind of a giveaway of the endings and such.
Carrie: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i342kN_gNlw&feature=related
The Shining: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YMoEWx9w2ag&feature=related
American History X: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oPjJtdqK7UM&feature=related
25th Hour: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YlBBixM2umw
American Beauty: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yH_CfkNUC_g&feature=related
Breakfast at Tiffany’s: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zTJu9VY1d6M
Requiem for a Dream: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uuzNohk5cYw
Fight Club: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RHLYdqihlkA
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pbTIvu34uz0&feature=related
Reservoir Dogs: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yTf2En-7LhY
Lord of the Rings: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WSucQvMTo-M
So this is how I brainstorm…And end up with 4 pages of stuff for a blog entry. At least I’ve got the basics planned out!
Jess
As for genres…I’ve put together a bit of a list, just to get started.
- Horror/slasher/thriller ***
- Mystery *
- Romance ***
- Action **
- Comedy *
- Western ***
- Cartoon *
- Cult film ***
- Martial arts **
- Musical *
- Science fiction **
- Comic hero *
- War ***
- Drama ***
The stars indicate the likelihood of each genre being in my composition, though I’ll probably think of other genres to add to this list and change my list of preferences a few times before/during the composition process. So far, it looks as though I’ll be doing a medley composed of horror, romance, western, cult film, war and drama based themes.
I’ve put a bit of thought into the instrumentation, but haven’t come to any conclusions yet. Since there will be three performers, and since most movie music is fairly dense in texture, I’ve decided that no matter what, the use of piano in this composition will be a constant. A good idea would be to put a bass instrument and a treble instrument in there as well, so I’m leaning toward bass (possibly electric bass, though I’m not sure yet) or cello and some type of a wind instrument for the upper voice. I’d like to compose for violin, but I’d really rather have only one stringed instrument for this one. Flute might be neat, since it, in my opinion, sounds good in both its high and low registers and is fairly versatile. My only worries would be if it would be drowned out by the cello and piano…(Yes, I just decided that I’m using cello) Maybe trumpet would be a better idea, though (please don’t kill me, Heidi!) I’m not very partial to that particular instrument. I might go for trombone, because it can be both loud and ominous and soft and haunting.
Piano, cello and trombone it is, then. A slightly strange combination, but I think it might work out. I’ll toy around with this a bit before I make any commitments.
Films! I almost forgot- I’ve come up with a few ideas for which films to use for each genre. Well, not each genre, just the ones I’m more likely to use. Thanks to the book “501 Must-See Movies,” I’ve got LOTS of options.
Horror:
- Psycho *
- The Birds *
- Night of the Living Dead **
- Carrie ***
- The Shining ***
Romance:
- Gone with the Wind *
- Casablanca *
- Breakfast at Tiffany’s ***
- Love Story **
- Pretty Woman *
Action:
- Spartacus *
- Indiana Jones, Raiders of the Lost Ark ***
- Die Hard *
- Braveheart ***
- Gladiator **
Western:
- Dances with Wolves **
- The Good, The Bad and the Ugly *
- The Postman *
- Davy Crockett *
Cult/independant Films:
- Scarface *
- Clockwork Orange *
- Donnie Darko ***
- Reservoir Dogs ***
- Pulp Fiction *
- Elephant **
- Requiem for a Dream ***
- Fight Club ***
- Boondock Saints *
-
Drama:
- American History X ***
- 25th Hour ***
- The Graduate *
- One Flew over the Cuckoo’s Nest **
- Fatal Attraction *
- The Shawshank redemption *
- American Beauty ***
War:
- The Great Escape *
- M*A*S*H *
- Apocalypse Now ***
- Schindler’s List *
- Saving Private Ryan *
After going through the list of movies I made up, I’ve decided to use the following genres and if I’ve got too many, then maybe cut from them…But they’ll be the foundation for this piece: horror, romance, cult/indie, drama and possibly action. There’s a pretty good selection there, though I’ll definitely have to separate drama and cult/indie and put western, romance and horror in between them, because those first three genres could have similar sounding sections. Horror, romance and action are very disctinctive too, so they shouldn’t prove to be too much of a problem. I’ve narrowed down my movie choices too.
Horror: Carrie or Shining (Go Stephen King!)
Drama: American History X, 25th Hour (Yes, Edward Norton is my favourite actor) or American Beauty
Romance: Definitely Breakfast at Tiffany’s
Cult/Indie: Requiem for a Dream, Fight Club, Reservoir Dogs or Donnie Darko. Probably one of the first three.
Action: Spartacus, Gladiator, Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers or Braveheart.
As for movie scenes…
Carrie: The ending scene as she burns everything down.
The Shining: When Jack Nicholson cracks and does the “Heeeeeere’s Johnny!” thing.
American History X: Ending scene. If I can watch it without crying.
25th Hour: Final scene
American Beauty: final scene as well…I’m noticing a trend here
Breakfast at Tiffany’s: Once again…The ending.
Requiem for a Dream: …The ending…
Fight Club: Undecided. Either the ending, or the realization.
Reservoir Dogs: I’m tempted to do the gasoline and ear scene, though I think I like “Stuck in the Middle with You” in that scene too much to want to change it…Maybe the showdown between Mr. Pink and Mr. White, or one of the action scenes.
Donnie Darko: Not too sure…Though it’d be cool if it involved Frank the bunny.
Spartacus: Not sure…It’s been a while since I’ve seen it.
Gladiator: One of the arena scenes
Lord of the Rings: The battle at Helm’s Deep
Braveheart: battle scene
I’ve looked into finding some of the scenes on youtube too…For those of you who haven’t seen these movies and don’t want the endings spoiled, I’d suggest you not watch these videos, because they’re kind of a giveaway of the endings and such.
Carrie: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i342kN_gNlw&feature=related
The Shining: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YMoEWx9w2ag&feature=related
American History X: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oPjJtdqK7UM&feature=related
25th Hour: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YlBBixM2umw
American Beauty: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yH_CfkNUC_g&feature=related
Breakfast at Tiffany’s: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zTJu9VY1d6M
Requiem for a Dream: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uuzNohk5cYw
Fight Club: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RHLYdqihlkA
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pbTIvu34uz0&feature=related
Reservoir Dogs: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yTf2En-7LhY
Lord of the Rings: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WSucQvMTo-M
So this is how I brainstorm…And end up with 4 pages of stuff for a blog entry. At least I’ve got the basics planned out!
Jess
Sunday, October 19, 2008
Entry 6.
Now comes the nitty gritty part of composition…The dreaded editing. This means going through, tweaking all the little notes I don’t like and adding in enough road mapping so that the performers know what I want without having to guess…
I’d like to start off with a rather amusing discovery of mine…If you change the meter without specifying how many bars you want to be in that specific meter, it will convert the WHOLE PIECE into the meter and you’ll be left with one heck of a screw up. I’d also like to thank the creators of Finale for allowing me to click the ‘undo’ button about 50 times in order to fix said error.
Looking back now, having finished the editing in my first piece, it wasn’t all that hard. Some things I changed just because I didn’t like the aimlessness in the melody, and other things were just menial accents and such that had to be added in. I added a bit to the middle and another bar to the end just because I wanted this piece to end on a question rather than a statement, which give it a good reason to go into the next piece. It’s still a very short piece, but I don’t think we’re being expected to compose stuff like Brahms or Beethoven yet…Which is nice. It would be neat to have to write something like a symphony, though I think it’d be quite a task.
The second piece I had already edited, so I just tweaked a few things here and there, adding a different ending to it so that this piece ended differently than the first. The first piece won’t segue into the second, but there’ll be a more prominent ending to the second piece as compared to the first, which ends with an open question.
The third piece was also more or less edited last weekend as well, so I only had to change a few things here and there, tweak a few rhythms and especially dynamics. I went dynamic happy in the piano, dividing the left and right hand by dynamics…The right hand, in the middle section, is primarily p, while the left hand is f and obnoxious. I kept the ending the same since it has the Dies Irae Dies Illa theme in the left hand, which I quite like. I changed the name to ‘Filosophy,’ because I wanted to maintain the F theme in the titles, and ‘Inebriation’ just didn’t seem to fit anymore. It sounds more like a ‘Philosophy’ anyway just with terrible spelling.
Well, there you have it. Now I just have to do my programme notes, ‘bind’ this thing, (which could be interesting…I don’t know if I have any binding things in my room, so I may have to venture to the square.) print it out and voila! Finito!
Jess
I’d like to start off with a rather amusing discovery of mine…If you change the meter without specifying how many bars you want to be in that specific meter, it will convert the WHOLE PIECE into the meter and you’ll be left with one heck of a screw up. I’d also like to thank the creators of Finale for allowing me to click the ‘undo’ button about 50 times in order to fix said error.
Looking back now, having finished the editing in my first piece, it wasn’t all that hard. Some things I changed just because I didn’t like the aimlessness in the melody, and other things were just menial accents and such that had to be added in. I added a bit to the middle and another bar to the end just because I wanted this piece to end on a question rather than a statement, which give it a good reason to go into the next piece. It’s still a very short piece, but I don’t think we’re being expected to compose stuff like Brahms or Beethoven yet…Which is nice. It would be neat to have to write something like a symphony, though I think it’d be quite a task.
The second piece I had already edited, so I just tweaked a few things here and there, adding a different ending to it so that this piece ended differently than the first. The first piece won’t segue into the second, but there’ll be a more prominent ending to the second piece as compared to the first, which ends with an open question.
The third piece was also more or less edited last weekend as well, so I only had to change a few things here and there, tweak a few rhythms and especially dynamics. I went dynamic happy in the piano, dividing the left and right hand by dynamics…The right hand, in the middle section, is primarily p, while the left hand is f and obnoxious. I kept the ending the same since it has the Dies Irae Dies Illa theme in the left hand, which I quite like. I changed the name to ‘Filosophy,’ because I wanted to maintain the F theme in the titles, and ‘Inebriation’ just didn’t seem to fit anymore. It sounds more like a ‘Philosophy’ anyway just with terrible spelling.
Well, there you have it. Now I just have to do my programme notes, ‘bind’ this thing, (which could be interesting…I don’t know if I have any binding things in my room, so I may have to venture to the square.) print it out and voila! Finito!
Jess
Thursday, October 9, 2008
Entry 5.
This could be fun. Or completely and utterly frustrating but I’m thinking positive…I’m thankful now that I wrote down a lot of the things I should work on with each of the three pieces, because that way I have a goal to go for, and notes on things which need to be tweaked in each piece.
What I find really interesting is that upon listening to the pieces all in a row, it’s amazing to see the difference in them, and the maturity, even though they’ve been written within a few days, maybe a week of each other. Maybe I’m just being subjective, but I really do find that the later two compositions have a lot more in them than the first one, and the last one definitely has a lot more in it than the second and first both. I’m not sure if this was just a fluke or if I was actually beginning to find my niche in the world of atonal music. If I continue to ‘think positive,’ I’d say yes, I have become a great deal more comfortable writing atonal music after all the time I’ve spent composing these three pieces and writing about them along the way. Or I could be pessimistic as per usual and say that it’s simply by chance that my pieces ended up progressing in this way.
Anywho, back to more productivity and less pessimism. Looking at ‘Floss,’ my first piece I really feel very little identification with what I have down on the page. Reading my blog entry again and listening to the piece over again clears some things up, though I really find it hard to identify with this piece, as though I didn’t write it at all. It simply lacks the ambition and feeling I wanted it to have…In short, it’s very dry and thin, though when I say ‘thin’ I don’t necessarily mean texture wise. It feels rather flat and bland, which isn’t what I want in any of my pieces unless I’m actually trying to write a doormat type of piece. I’m going through it now and fixing a few things, making the articulations clearer and adding rhythms into the beginning and end where the clarinetist blows air through the clarinet without actually making a pitch…And I’m rather proud of myself for figuring out how to do that on Finale. You have to understand that I’m the type of person who does not get technology whatsoever. I moved some notes around too, mostly in the clarinet in the beginning and in the piano and clarinet both in the middle section.
‘Frost’ was a lot easier to fix. I listened to it several times and decided that only a few places needed some note adjustment, though mostly I had to focus on dynamics and articulations, using more descriptive words throughout the piece to make it clearer exactly what type of sound I want. This piece is a great deal different than the first and in many ways, so I’m trying to make it seem even more separate, not out of my dislike for ‘Floss’ but simply because I’d like each of the three movements to have their own character, each differing vastly from the last.
And then ‘Inebriation.’ Because I like it so much, I’ve decided to add more to the development section so that it goes on a bit longer than it had before. As a result, it is 16 bars longer, which satisfies me, at least for now. This one is the easiest to work with, as the melodic materiel is a bit less complex and easier to write. I think it is this change in complexity which makes this piece stand out from the others, which are rhythmically more intricate and melodically more dynamic.
OH- something I forgot to mention earlier, and just remembered now. I borrowed the ‘dies irae’ theme in this piece for the very ending…If you look at the first beat in the left hand of the piano for the last seven bars, you’ll see the ‘dies irae dies illa.’ This I kept in the piece, simply because I think it’s neat, and I added it in when I first wrote the piece because it was after 4:00 in the morning, and it felt like the right thing to do.
Well, that’s it for now. I’ll go through the pieces again, taking note of what I think I’ve missed in this round of editing and tweaking things yet again.
This job just never ends.
Jess
What I find really interesting is that upon listening to the pieces all in a row, it’s amazing to see the difference in them, and the maturity, even though they’ve been written within a few days, maybe a week of each other. Maybe I’m just being subjective, but I really do find that the later two compositions have a lot more in them than the first one, and the last one definitely has a lot more in it than the second and first both. I’m not sure if this was just a fluke or if I was actually beginning to find my niche in the world of atonal music. If I continue to ‘think positive,’ I’d say yes, I have become a great deal more comfortable writing atonal music after all the time I’ve spent composing these three pieces and writing about them along the way. Or I could be pessimistic as per usual and say that it’s simply by chance that my pieces ended up progressing in this way.
Anywho, back to more productivity and less pessimism. Looking at ‘Floss,’ my first piece I really feel very little identification with what I have down on the page. Reading my blog entry again and listening to the piece over again clears some things up, though I really find it hard to identify with this piece, as though I didn’t write it at all. It simply lacks the ambition and feeling I wanted it to have…In short, it’s very dry and thin, though when I say ‘thin’ I don’t necessarily mean texture wise. It feels rather flat and bland, which isn’t what I want in any of my pieces unless I’m actually trying to write a doormat type of piece. I’m going through it now and fixing a few things, making the articulations clearer and adding rhythms into the beginning and end where the clarinetist blows air through the clarinet without actually making a pitch…And I’m rather proud of myself for figuring out how to do that on Finale. You have to understand that I’m the type of person who does not get technology whatsoever. I moved some notes around too, mostly in the clarinet in the beginning and in the piano and clarinet both in the middle section.
‘Frost’ was a lot easier to fix. I listened to it several times and decided that only a few places needed some note adjustment, though mostly I had to focus on dynamics and articulations, using more descriptive words throughout the piece to make it clearer exactly what type of sound I want. This piece is a great deal different than the first and in many ways, so I’m trying to make it seem even more separate, not out of my dislike for ‘Floss’ but simply because I’d like each of the three movements to have their own character, each differing vastly from the last.
And then ‘Inebriation.’ Because I like it so much, I’ve decided to add more to the development section so that it goes on a bit longer than it had before. As a result, it is 16 bars longer, which satisfies me, at least for now. This one is the easiest to work with, as the melodic materiel is a bit less complex and easier to write. I think it is this change in complexity which makes this piece stand out from the others, which are rhythmically more intricate and melodically more dynamic.
OH- something I forgot to mention earlier, and just remembered now. I borrowed the ‘dies irae’ theme in this piece for the very ending…If you look at the first beat in the left hand of the piano for the last seven bars, you’ll see the ‘dies irae dies illa.’ This I kept in the piece, simply because I think it’s neat, and I added it in when I first wrote the piece because it was after 4:00 in the morning, and it felt like the right thing to do.
Well, that’s it for now. I’ll go through the pieces again, taking note of what I think I’ve missed in this round of editing and tweaking things yet again.
This job just never ends.
Jess
Thursday, October 2, 2008
Entry 4.
This week’s piece, presuming it ends as well as it is going right now (I’m about one page into it as things stand) will be my favourite out of all three of them. It was the hardest to begin, but I began by writing about 8 bars of piano before I even started working on the clarinet part…I know that this would probably earn me a sound rap across the wrist, but I simply wanted to get a feel for the piano part before I went all clarinet-crazy. Piano comes to me a lot easier than clarinet does anyway, seeing as clarinet is a transposing instrument…And transposition is my enemy. But thanks to Finale and its ability to play back everything I’ve clicked into the staff on the page, I’m getting by without too much tooth-pulling.
It’s definitely a strange piece, and so far it sounds just about as tired as I feel. I’m not sure whether that’s a good thing or a bad thing yet, but the more I listen to it, the more tired I feel, and the more tired I feel the more the piece takes on this dismal character. I decided halfway through composing the second piece that I was going to name this one ‘Inebriation,’ simply because I felt a piece that sounded as though it was composed after a ten-day drinking binge would be a good way to end a three piece composition thing. I’m still not sure what to call this work as a whole- it’s not a sonata, it’s not a concerto…It’s just a thing, right now, I guess. Maybe I’ll invent a term for it that’ll be used 100 years after I’m dead, that sounds like a good plan.
I think I might be getting a bit tonal with this one…It sounds more like a tonal piece with some elements of atonality rather than an atonal piece with hints of tonality…Uh oh. I’ll tweak that…
I like the development section in contrast to the primary section of the piece, which is fairly lazy and rhythmically slow, and though the development section isn’t much faster rhythm-wise, it introduces a slightly different tone, though the overall tone is still fairly negative…
Why can’t I write a nice, happy atonal piece? Everything I write seems to be fraught with angst or some type of frustration. I guess that’s simply because of the dissonances I use, because I know some atonal stuff is actually quite beautiful and peaceful. That should definitely be my next challenge- write an atonal piece which is beautiful and peaceful. Right now I’m perfectly happy writing angry stuff, it’s a good way to relieve stress.
Well, it’s 4:04 in the morning. I have to say, this is my favourite piece I’ve written out of the three, so maybe Robbie’s technique works…Though I’m not sure how much I’ll adore myself for staying up this late working on a piece by the time class rolls around today…
It’s definitely a strange piece, and so far it sounds just about as tired as I feel. I’m not sure whether that’s a good thing or a bad thing yet, but the more I listen to it, the more tired I feel, and the more tired I feel the more the piece takes on this dismal character. I decided halfway through composing the second piece that I was going to name this one ‘Inebriation,’ simply because I felt a piece that sounded as though it was composed after a ten-day drinking binge would be a good way to end a three piece composition thing. I’m still not sure what to call this work as a whole- it’s not a sonata, it’s not a concerto…It’s just a thing, right now, I guess. Maybe I’ll invent a term for it that’ll be used 100 years after I’m dead, that sounds like a good plan.
I think I might be getting a bit tonal with this one…It sounds more like a tonal piece with some elements of atonality rather than an atonal piece with hints of tonality…Uh oh. I’ll tweak that…
I like the development section in contrast to the primary section of the piece, which is fairly lazy and rhythmically slow, and though the development section isn’t much faster rhythm-wise, it introduces a slightly different tone, though the overall tone is still fairly negative…
Why can’t I write a nice, happy atonal piece? Everything I write seems to be fraught with angst or some type of frustration. I guess that’s simply because of the dissonances I use, because I know some atonal stuff is actually quite beautiful and peaceful. That should definitely be my next challenge- write an atonal piece which is beautiful and peaceful. Right now I’m perfectly happy writing angry stuff, it’s a good way to relieve stress.
Well, it’s 4:04 in the morning. I have to say, this is my favourite piece I’ve written out of the three, so maybe Robbie’s technique works…Though I’m not sure how much I’ll adore myself for staying up this late working on a piece by the time class rolls around today…
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